Promises

You promised you'd be here
For me always and forever

That i'd always have
Your shoulder to cry on

But when i needed you
The very most you were gone

Someone made me cry
He ripped my heart in two

When you took your life
That guy was you

In MeMoRy Of MiKe GoOd
8/86-12/03

Please comment on this poem, it was written about a friend of mine who committed suicide and i still have no clue if i could have helped